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Crucial Moment Chapter 1 Bad Surprises

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* * * Crucial Moment * * *

It was a beautiful day in the village of Grinigoire.
a young maiden walks happily through the village ,Her name is Illiana Renae.At the moment everything most wonderful to her.
Sophia(her younger sister) rushes to her side to meet her.
"Illiana...I've never seen you so happy...what's up?"
"Oh nothing everythings just so magical" answered Illiana.
"Magical?...Whatever! Does Raphael have anything to do with it"asked Sophia "
"What makes you think he has anything to do with it"Illiana said.
"Because he's you boyfriend" answered Sophia.
Instantly Illiana turns red and blushes, she then says in a small voice says "were engaged"
"...Wow...when's the date?" asked  Sophia.
Bernardo wants it on a holy day answered Illiana
Isn't that another year though asked Sophia?
Illiana who was to busy fantasizing her and Raphael spending the rest of there lives together just answered"oh yeah".
As they walked in their home a dark figure in the corner of the alley was spying on them.
He had been listening to their whole conversation, but dear reader do not feel threatened by this character .
He's Raphael DeSorel and he will soon marry the love of his life.
Raphael's life earlier was difficult, his father disappeared when he was just a baby, And for some reason his mother didn't like talking about it. They had little money and when he was eight she was murdered. Soon Raphael had no choice but to steal  to live...and soon found out he was pretty good at it.
for a long while he was alone, until he met Terence. Terence was a tall and skinny archer with pointy ears and he loved the forest.
Once Ileana and Sophia were inside Raphael decided to visit Bernardo the village priest.
As he walked in he noticed Bernardo laying across one of the pew's drinking the communion wine like a...fish.
Once Bernardo noticed Raphael he jumped up in shock and tried to explain he dropped something in the bottle.
"Here hand me the bottle and I'll get it out for you while we discuss mine and Illiana's wedding" said Raphael.
Bernardo sadly handed Raphael the rest of the wine.
Why did you schedule my wedding day on the holy day next year asked Raphael?
Well  began Bernardo, horrible things have been happening in the cathedral  of Mercedes, every full moon on Sunday night for the past..10 years now a dark man named Karma has taken young people of pure hearts and sacrificed them."Oh really" said Raphael who didn't quite believe him, But after a few moment he realizes Bernardo's serious.Bernardo continues "well he tranquilizes them and he chants something in an ancient language then I don't know how but he pulls the life out of them, I tried numerous times to tell him what he was doing was wrong but he wouldn't hear it, He even threatened that if he ever saw me again he would eliminate me." Hmm Raphael hmm'd "sounds like your in quite a pickle…um…have you heard any news of him?" No but after mine and Trevor's trip Mercedes was destroyed,whats really weird was that Karma's dark cathedral was untouched that's why I want it on a most holy of holy days" said Bernardo. Raphael examined the bottle for awhile then said" why don't you just wed us when there is no full moon and when its not a Sunday night". huh? Answered a puzzled Bernardo .
Listen Bernardo your drunk, me and Illiana want to get married as soon as possible and next year is to long. But …began Bernardo but It was to late Raphael stormed out of the Church of Gringoire. Waiting just outside was the local Sheriff of Gringoire, Douglas. Sheriff Douglas was a pretty normal well sized sheriff, except for his thick moustache which he took just as much in as his position as sheriff. He leaned against the church as Raphael came out. "Good Morning Raphael, confessing are we hmm that's rather mature for a slimy thief like you" said Douglas. Raphael was going to run, till he noticed all the soldiers surrounding him. Raphael stood there smiled and said well it looks like you got me he said holding his hands toward Douglas. Douglas was surprised as he pulled a pair of handcuffs out of his coat uniform pocket. "I heard you're starting a new life" said Douglas. "That's right began Raphael, Illiana wouldn't marry me unless I gave it up". That's no excuse though said Douglas. No excuse for what…WhAAA!!! Raphael asked as a soldier behind him handcuffed his ankles. "For your crimes"! Douglas finished as him and the other soldiers tossed him in a police carriage. Sheriff Douglas climbed up to the drivers seat of the carriage as soldier stood on each side of the carriage to make sure Raphael didn't escape out the doors. Raphael stuggled to come up with a plan of escape. Then suddenly he pushed the left door open with his feet, the door knocked the soldier on the head, he then fell off the carriage. Douglas looked over and was gonna remind the two soldiers behind him to mind the prisoner till he saw the prisoner belly flop on to the road, obviously trying to escape. The Sheriff was furious, in fact he was so furious he pulled out his pistol and aimed towards Raphael. But Raphael was quick, he lifted his legs just before the bullet went flying. As the bullet came it went into the hole of the handcuffs and destroyed the locking mechanism. And just like that the cuffs fell right off at that time the other soldier noticed Raphael wasn't in the carriage and began charging after him with Raphael's own sword(they took it as they arrested him).but before he could unsheathe it, Raphael ran up and slugged him with his cuffed hands. "that belongs to me" Raphael said as he took his trusty sword "Shining Star". Now all he needed was the key too his hands which Douglas. Suddenly Douglas fired another shot at Raphael, Raphael ducked and quickly ran behind the carriage. Douglas got out of the drivers seat and quickly followed but once there he saw no one. Then suddenly Raphael's faced showed up in front of Douglas upside down and bit the keys off from around Douglas's neck. Douglas realized Raphael had climbed on top of the carriage and was now free…again. Adios! Raphael said as he drove the carriage away to Ellendeal Forest leaving a rather angry Sheriff behind.
You know that special someone you plan to spend the rest of your life with.well she was just kidnapped by a bunch of baddies you would see people dressup like on halloween,only these are the real deal kind. and say oh I dont know burned down the town you live in.but why,who brought them, where are they going, how do you stop them,to find out well...read
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Le Gasp! :glomp: BERNARDO!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: